PRATIKSHA GUHA
Class 10 Section B
The sudden stream of cool air current rushed into the
moonlit darkness of the room accompanied by the creaking sound of the door that
now stood ajar. The steady flame of the candle flickered with quick graceful
curves as the soft air blew over it. Susan’s sweet dilemma was sweetly
disturbed with the much-awaited arrival.
Her longing gaze acutely transformed into a rapid
thoughtless search, the dusky shadow of her bend lashes in the smooth cavity
below her eyes, disappearing to the glorious aureole, that now apparently was
sourced from her ecstatic face. Her lips quivered with excitement. She folded
her hands and pressed it against her chest to subdue the loud thumping of her
heart, her ‘Biological’ heart that behaves in a similar manner whenever it
perceived the signal of the arrival of her ‘Philosophical’ heart ---her true
heart, her soul, the love of her life—Max.
Her lips curved into
a beautiful smile with the touch of her beloved on her shoulders. She turned,
she looked up. The man with his hand on her shoulders gleaming happily, his
handsome features glowing with awe at the soothing beauty of his girl, a
similar that grips him when he is in the vicinity of his love, of her
fragrance, her touch, her affectionate eyes bubbling with Love.
“You missed me, Max?” was the childish question.
“Of course I did!” came the laughing reply.
“Lie….. You couldn't miss me when you were battling the
Romans?” She asked, shaking her head.
“Of course I was! I was physically battling them and
mentally battling out the two opposite emotions, whether I should die for the
century or live for you!” She said with pretence of amazement, suppressing a
knowing smile.
“So I am!” he said happily. Susan slipped her fingers
through his and stood up resting her head against his brave chest. Max touched
her bun and unmade it, letting her hair roll down her neck, then shoulder,
brushing her back airily and swinging with its unmade ends at her waist. The
dark strands engulfed her completely. Max caressed the soft curls and brought
his lips close to her ears, whispering eternal words of Love and then the
request for dance.
“Dance?” she breathed and fully gave her arms into Max’s
strength, his arms, his love. He pulled her close, holding her y the wait. The
dance began to the tune of the several realms--- the moonlight, the sea waves,
the rain-washed garden around, the unpredictable nocturnal breeze and to the
melody of the inner realms, the untouchable realms, of the distant insides,
that served to be the magnetism of attraction between the two Lovers, Susan’s
floral printed gown seemed to be the paintbrush, brushing the air with the
diverse colours of her dance steps. Her hands were tightly clasped in Max’s,
her feet raised to lift her posture to meet Max’s bent face. The dance
continued as they touched each other lips, rubbed their faces and shut their
eyes to the world, completely drinking in the mirth of true Love, everlasting
bonding, their bodies cutting the air at perfect angles moving to the silent
tune, punctuated by Susan’s laughter following the playful whispers of Max. The
dance continued; the dance of the most romantic couple, Susan and Max.
Across the garden, in the servant’s bungalow, two servants
sat in the verandah couch watching the spectacle through the open window, with
astonishment. Astonishment, not pleasant but fearful. They watched as their
mistress dressed in a floral gown, danced away, clinging to the air, to
nothingness, laughing aloud to herself and fiddling through her locks.
“This has become a regular task. It is high time we take our
step” said the male servant. “No please,” piped in the female, wiping her tears
off,”We should take care of her, Master would be disappointed”. She wept
looking up at the star –studded firmament. “Please be practical”, came the firm
reply. “It has been a year since the death ceremony” he paused. We need to do
this, We have no other alternative, I will
take the blame if anything happens to her” he said, and ignoring her
wife’s violent he dialed the number of the asylum.
Susan fully gave into Max’s arms, his west windy room,
however the dance continued ceaselessly to the silent tune of Love, eternity as
Susan and Max kissed Each other fondly never pausing their late night dance,
everything and completely drinking in the mirth of their romance, free from the
fear that tomorrow might separate her from her love- her eyes, that still
dwelled in the past, reflecting love and anticipation, eyes blind to the
present, eyes whose real tomorrow was going to reflect the coldness of the
living dead.
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